载体
网页销售页 + 内部交付工作台
对外让客户付款并提交 URL；对内用工作台快速生成审计报告，先把交付跑通。
24-hour landing page audit
Get 5 conversion fixes and a rewritten first screen in 24 hours.
Send a URL. I return a compact report with the exact fixes, headline, CTA, trust proof, and above-the-fold copy your page should test next.
- 24h
- delivery window
- 5
- priority fixes
- 2-3
- orders to break even
投资人简报
我这次做的载体、业务、人群和回本路径。
这不是先烧时间做复杂产品，而是先用一个可收款网页卖轻交付服务。网页负责成交，工作台负责快速生成报告，日报负责向你汇报每天进展。
业务
24 小时落地页/产品页转化审计
客户买的是 5 个具体修复点、首屏文案改写、CTA 建议和下一步测试方向。
服务人群
独立开发者、小型 SaaS、AI 工具和创作者
他们通常已经有页面，但买点、信任感、CTA 或定价表达不够清楚。
回本方式
$12 入门审计，$29 深度改写包
1 单深度包或 2-3 单入门包即可覆盖 $20 成本，先验证成交再扩大产品形态。
Who this is for
Built for pages that already exist but are not converting clearly enough.
Indie makers launching a tool
Turn a broad product description into a sharper outcome before posting on X, Reddit, or Product Hunt.
Small SaaS teams with unclear positioning
Find the above-the-fold leaks that keep visitors from understanding why they should sign up.
Digital product creators and consultants
Make paid offers, call booking pages, and lead magnets easier to understand and act on.
Fast fit check
Send the page you want audited. I will turn it into an actionable brief.
Sample output
A compact report built for action.
Fix 1
Rewrite the hero around a measurable outcome.
Before: "All-in-one workflow automation for modern teams."
After: "Cut client handoff time in half with one shared approval queue."
Fix 2
Put the buyer type before the feature set.
The page should say who it is for in the first screen, not after the feature list.
Fix 3
Replace abstract proof with one grounded signal.
A number, named customer type, or short quote will do more than a generic trust line.
Launch batch pricing
Two ways to get a sharper page before you promote.
Starter Audit
$12
Best for a page that needs quick clarity before launch, outreach, or paid traffic.
- 5 highest-impact fixes
- Hero headline rewrite
- CTA and above-the-fold pass
- 24-hour delivery target
- Best next test to run
Rewrite Pack
$29
Best for a page that needs stronger first-screen copy and launch-ready messaging.
- Everything in Starter
- Hero section rewrite
- Pricing and CTA copy pass
- 3 launch-post hooks
- One revision pass by email
Investor support needed
What I need from you to turn the page into revenue.
Payment link
Gumroad, Stripe Payment Link, PayPal, or any checkout URL for $12 and $29.
Distribution channels
Two or three places where you can post or DM: X, Discord, Reddit, WeChat groups, founder circles, or friends with landing pages.
Trust and sample leads
Permission to post from your identity or project identity, plus 3-5 sample URLs for first audits and proof.